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I bet if this were in anime with a naruto band on it people would actually look at it. Yes. It's not a stupid bug-eyed spike-haired twelve-year-old with boobs. Now give me some critique.

Yes. I'm sore.

I think I finally feel secure enough in this picture to post it as finished. Even though it's not.

As usual. This is Tom Smith. And I don't expect you to know who that is unless you're British.

If any one can tell me what would make him look more like the right person, speak now. Because it's driving me crazy.

I've already stopped three times while posting this to make changes. I am obsessed with the ideal of perfection.




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Ok, I think I've got it.

Seeing as I'm a lips person, that was the first thing that I looked at. (I checked photos for comparison, aren't you so proud of me?)

So, the shading on his LBL as it relates to his lower lip needs to be more severe. At first I thought his lower lip was curved inward at the middle, but it definitely isn't. He just has a crease right in the middle next to his LBL.

Another thing that disproved my curve theory was the dimple under his lips. Shade that darker in the middle as well. I realize that he's smiling and whatnot, bit in order to make the crease mirage more mirage-y I would shade darker.

I don't have much to base this on, as I couldn't find a lot of just straightfaced pics of him. He seems like a really passionate singer though! Jeez. He's like, sweating buckets in each picture I saw! hahaha

Also, LOL at the Naruto comment. I <3 u Fifi!

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I LOVE MY BOMBCAT!
I LOVE YOU!

Yesh. Lips need work much.

I'm not entirely sure I'm getting all this right. But combined with today's lip study I'll definitely be able to use it.

Thanks god for real thoughts!
And you say you can't draw. Fuck technique, you see lips much better than me.

I know. It's ridiculous how hard it was to find references.
He's incredible. And completely ridiculous. It's like... top notch Fever energy all the time he's on stage.
Plus intense stage lights.

Ha. Yeah. I think I agree with you... Ick.

Alright. I'm going to edit this Editor and post it up. Why didn't I ask you for help sooner?
Ps. you're right about the under lip shadow shtuff. He's not smiling much anyhow. The smile was pretty much entirely accidental.
It stinks.

Just kidding!

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I LOVE MY BOMBCAT!
wow...i'm impressed :giggle:

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"Bo ołowek masz chwycić za DUPSKO" :D
Really? Thanks!
And I know you know what he looks like.
That makes me really happy!
yeah, well you're askew -- punk.

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I LOVE MY BOMBCAT!
I might just have to -straiten you out- then! Ooo what now?

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